DESIRE
REVOLT OF THE DOGS, CHICKENS
AND DUCKS
Final Scene
Copyright © 2012
Reg. Pend. WGAW - All
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INT. BEDROOM
- night
[Note: This scene is described in great visual and audio
detail, to capture and make clear the intended intensity.]
Moonlit shadows.
CU: Jackson Pollack abstract flurry of many-colored fabrics
sensually cascading into the frame, up, down, crumpled on the floor.
SND:
Exaggerated.
Complex solos and symphonies of swishing, crinkling, metal… Cotton, synthetics,
alpaca wool, silk, rubber, snaps, buckles, heavy, feather light.
Everything in the
past 90+ minutes, their past 2 months, their past 2 lifetimes, has led up to
this culminating moment that extends in logical time, then poetic
time…confronting and pushing our expectation. Disbelief, suspension of
disbelief, acceptance, full-hearted breathless immersion. The audience of
voyeurs actively joins, participating in a 3-some. Relief and celebration. The
utter reality of it all.
MUSIC: Cuts off abruptly, in the middle of a passage…All
that can be heard is room-tone, occupied by two sets of breaths.
SND: Location sounds are heightened.
ECU:
Extended
abstract montage…His HAND glides over skin, squeezing it, disappearing into its
crevices, then reappearing like a drowning man gasping for air, gliding,
gliding, hesitating…moving at different speeds as it navigates the bumps, the
hills, the steep drops, gliding up the mountain, catching its breath, then
coasting down, faster and faster, stopping at the base…through the thick vine
forest, around, in, inside, out and in, deeper, deeper, exploding out,
quivering, repeating, shaking, repeating… reaching his apogee, freezing,
erupting, again, again…collapse, total collapse, breathing in waves, the
imperceptible shimmering skin of two opposing forces in perfect harmony, hazy
in golden light that radiates from within their heat, tiny drops of mist
reflecting light. They glow.
CLICK!
Total darkness.
Total darkness.
Gray ghost images begin to emerge from the nothingness.
SND: A distant lonely wolf howl.
CUT to black.
END
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